I like this character. And the colours are gorgeous.

Critique...It would be nice if the light around the pole and for the border had more of a gradient like the star in her hand. Something about the feet are throwing me off, I think it's the angle of the design on her shoes. The fingers of her hand that's on the wire are lit/foreshortened kind of oddly, or maybe it's the positioning of the hand, either way it doesn't look like she's actually holding onto the wire. And the wires should be curved differently. First of all the one she's sitting on should be lower because it's supporting her weight, secondly, the other ones are curving upwards too soon; the poles aren't that close together so the wires should still be leaning downward with the force of gravity. And the piece of wood going across the pole doesn't have proper perspective. The length on both sides are equal when the one further from the viewer should seem shorter and narrower.

Although her legs and feet look a little awkward, the overall work is quite impressive and cute.

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"To see a World in a grain of sand,
and a Heaven in a wild flower...
Hold the Infinity in the palm of your hand
and Eternity in a hour..."
William Blake

it's very nice and cute. the colours are also great.

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~Technology has ruined a lot of great excuses~

You definitely captured the lighting of sundown. I love the scrolls. They add a mysticism to the picture. ^_^

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“It seems that the sky is the bluest the furthest away so that we may always strive to reach it.”

I simply love it, you've done a great job on it!

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It is good to be merry and wise,
It is good to be honest and true;
'Tis well to be off with the old love
Before you go on with the new.

-Anon. (Modern version of an old song)

Thanks a bundle, glad to hear you like it

(just incase you were unaware) I've actually moved to ~versarnwen if you're still interested in seeing future works

Many cheers and cookies around I'll ttyl!

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.:I let my brain have free reign; it likes to lope in the pastures of insanity:.
.:Ëso ta Edò, laéda cona:.
.:Kiàda Hadò:.

I love the sky and the starts in this. And it has such a soft feel to it.

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GAMBIT: It was, chere. Every moment.

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